LET'S WORK TOGETHER and keep readers glued to the page!

 

Have you ever dreamed of writing a murder mystery? Perhaps you're already writing one, but you're stuck on how to leave a trail of reliable clues. Maybe your lead detective or sleuth isn't believable in their role. Or you fear the middle drags and the ending doesn't land the punch you wanted. You might even have a great idea for a mystery but aren't sure where to begin.

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That's where I come in. I've written eleven mysteries and created both believable amateur sleuths and working detectives. I've researched investigative techniques and interviewed law-enforcement and forensic professionals to understand how they work. You know the story you want to tell; I can help make the mystery and investigation work.

 

"My experience working with Lynn was fantastic.She gave me invaluable feedback, made great suggestions and helped me think of alternative options for my story. Her approach is supportive and helpful. This is a coach who is truly in your corner and would like you to do your best. I'm sure I'll be seeking her advice in the future again." Tali S.

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My goal is to help writers who long to create a credible mystery but struggle with things like:

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• Is the crime compelling, and does it make sense?

• Does the trail of clues create a fair but believable puzzle to be solved?

• Is the investigation roadmap believable?

• Is the villain a worthy adversary to your protagonist?

• Are the red herrings working?

• Does the detective have a logical path to the killer?

• Is there enough tension to keep the reader turning pages?

• Does the ending feel earned?

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Whether you're new to writing or just new to mysteries, there is tremendous value in working with someone who understands what it takes to craft a believable murder investigation. 

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I work with only a limited number of clients at a time so that I can give you my full attention and best advice. My only goal is to help you craft the best mystery possible. Here's an important point! Even though you don't work for law enforcement or, like me, have never actually killed someone (thank God!), this is a great opportunity to ask questions and do a deep dive into what makes a murder investigation work.

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YOUR VISION. YOUR STORY. MY EXPERIENCE.

 

**If you have questions or are not sure how this works, you can book a free 15-minute call. I can not only answer your questions, but you'll get a chance to see if we're a good fit. Just scroll to the bottom to fill out the questionnaire.

 

MY ROLE: I focus my attention on the mystery (crime, clues, investigation) and whether what you're creating is interesting, believable, and compelling. This is your story not mine. I'm a teacher at heart, so you can think of me as your personal trainer. I am not here to tell you 'how' to tell your story, but rather to act as a sounding board and give you feedback based on best practices and my years of experience writing and studying the crime of murder. (Yes, I think a lot about murder!) I will also occasionally conduct developmental edits once your story is complete, looking at the overall structure and flow, as well as strength of the characters, their interactions and role they play with the crime. If you are interested in this, message me separately.

YOUR ROLE: You'll need to come with an open mind. Writing is intensely personal, and sometimes the most useful feedback is the feedback that challenges an idea you really love. The good news is that I'm not an editor, and I'm not here to 'red line' your copy.  I'm here to help you identify what works, what falls short, and the opportunities to make it better. Your job will be to choose what feels right to you.

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"Lynn Bohart truly excels in providing top-notch writing advice, with her exceptional professionalism and keen attention to detail. Her deep understanding and quick responsiveness make working with her an absolute pleasure. I'm immensely thankful for her support as I navigate my first novel—her positive criticism is a lifeline on this steep learning curve." Kim W.

 

HOW WE DO IT: Once I receive your order, I will send you a Session Questionnaire to give me a sense of where you are in your writing journey, what your story is about, and your areas of concern. After I get that back, I'll schedule a short call to make sure I understand what your goals and objectives are. This is important so that my goals are your goals. Depending on the package you've purchased, we will go from there. 

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